I think that at the start you could of put a title to tell people what the peom was called. Why did you choose this poem? I think some of the slides were to slow and I was waiting for a bit, the other slides were fine. For your next one you could time the slides better, and make the writing easier to see.
I think that your music and most of your pictures went with the poem. You did forget to put the title and author on a slide before the video, and to tell us why you chose the poem and the message you thought was in it, so next time you need to make sure you read the task sheet. There was also a photo where you could not see all of the writing because it went off the edge, so you just needed to change the picture, or put lees words on that slide. Overall you thought about the pictures well to make sure they fitted with the poem.
I think that at the start you could of put a title to tell people what the peom was called. Why did you choose this poem? I think some of the slides were to slow and I was waiting for a bit, the other slides were fine. For your next one you could time the slides better, and make the writing easier to see.
ReplyDeleteI think that your music and most of your pictures went with the poem. You did forget to put the title and author on a slide before the video, and to tell us why you chose the poem and the message you thought was in it, so next time you need to make sure you read the task sheet. There was also a photo where you could not see all of the writing because it went off the edge, so you just needed to change the picture, or put lees words on that slide. Overall you thought about the pictures well to make sure they fitted with the poem.
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