I think you could of edited this a lot more. Some slides didn't have a capital letter at the start, and a couple had 'i' instead of 'I'. One slide didn't have writing at all. I think that your pictures were to repetitive, and you could of changed the pictures. Your music suited the song, but was quite short and the change over was quite noticeable.
I think this could be better if you used a longer song. Because it was quite short it just kept repeating, which was extremely annoying. You didn't have a title page at the start and didn't give any recognition to the band. You also haven't stated what the song means to you which was part of the task. The pictures you chose were good though. They definitely represented the lyrics.
Good job Griffyn I like your background music and I think it suited the song. You did not leave a message at the end saying why you chose this song or what the message was.
Well done Griffyn. Your video was well created, lots of the verses were repeated and the music suited but i think you should of included why you chose the song.
I think you could of edited this a lot more. Some slides didn't have a capital letter at the start, and a couple had 'i' instead of 'I'. One slide didn't have writing at all. I think that your pictures were to repetitive, and you could of changed the pictures. Your music suited the song, but was quite short and the change over was quite noticeable.
ReplyDeleteI think this could be better if you used a longer song. Because it was quite short it just kept repeating, which was extremely annoying. You didn't have a title page at the start and didn't give any recognition to the band. You also haven't stated what the song means to you which was part of the task. The pictures you chose were good though. They definitely represented the lyrics.
ReplyDeleteGood job Griffyn I like your background music and I think it suited the song. You did not leave a message at the end saying why you chose this song or what the message was.
ReplyDeleteWell done Griffyn. Your video was well created,
ReplyDeletelots of the verses were repeated and the music suited but i think you should of included why you chose the song.
I agree with Kylie34 you could have done a lot more, the photos were nice and the music is nice.
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